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Hello! I'm from ProjectComment! I'm here to bring you a critique!

First of all, I like how you shaded the blue blouse-skirt part. You paid a lot of attention to the loose blue fabric and it has a lot of folds. I also like how you coloured her eyes, glassy, but orb-like. I'm pretty sure you tweaked the hair shape, I like that shape there.

However, I would need to say her hair (pinks) are quite neon and were pastel-like in the movie, but it might be just of your liking of colours. Her left hand looks very stiff- it creates a feeling of stiffness of her pose. I think the blending of pink-blue for her hair's OK, but it seems like there are stray pin streaks on her blue side of hair.

Alright, thank you, have a nice day.